Thinking about Our Final Values Video

Eduardo Benavides
Positive comments
• The shots we liked where when it shows Boy 2 at an extreme close up of just his face looking around with his facial expressions as being affraid about the test hes gonna take. - Eduardo E. Ashley, and Sabrina
• We especially like the setting in an actual classroom. - Jacob D and Morgan D
• We especially like the close up shot of Kenny because it helped emphasize the idea that he is looking around and trying to look for someone to copy off of. - Michelle Hernandez and Blanca Ceja
• We especially like the shot of Kenny with his head down on his desk because it shows the feeling of being unprepared for something. - Isaiah S and Cesar J
• We especially like the close up shot of the students eyes, because it helped emphasize the idea that he was nervous and it also created suspense. - Taylor and Jose
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Suggestions
• You could add to the resolution by putting a title of the exact point. - Michelle Hernandez and Blanca Ceja
• You can add to the resolution by showing the grade that the main character got. This would help give us the idea that he did bad on the test for not studying. - Jacob D and Morgan D
• One edit we would change was the the number of cuts made. We thought the out point was set to late. We noticed when the video starts it is a straight cut. We would have used a cross disovle because it would give a better effect. - Jacob D and Morgan D
• You could also add a clip that shows a calendar in his home that says TEST on (what ever day) and him rushing out of the house. he doesn’t look at the calendar to see what he has.- Taylor and Jose

The positive comments that were most meaningful to us were from Isaiah and Cesar. They told us that they liked the shot of Kenny because it helped emphasize the idea that he’s unprepared and, and that was helpful because it showed us that what we were trying to show in that shot was understandable by the audience. Another positive comment was from Taylor and Jose. They told us that they liked the shots of the extreme close-up of Kenny’s eyes because it helped emphasize the idea that he was nervous and that it created suspense, and that was helpful because it also showed us that the audience actually got what we were trying to show in that shot.
One of the best suggestions we got were from Michelle and Blanca
They suggested that we add a title of the exact point to add to the resolution. We agree with this suggestion, and our plan to address it is to try it out and see how it looks in our video.
Another of the best suggestions we got were from Jacob and Morgan.
They suggested that we can add to the resolution by showing the grade that the main character got and that this would help give us the idea that he did badly on the test for not studying. We agree with this suggestion, and our plan to address it is to think about if have time to record another scene to try out the suggestion.